Fic for mildred_bobbin: Nothing You Can See That Isn't Shown - Part 2

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[yeomanrand.livejournal.com]

Lovely!

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[winter-hermit.livejournal.com]

This was lovely. Sherlock being horrible at being sweet when he's trying to do it the way other people do, but unexpectedly good at it when he does it his way. I loved him telling John how many people would have been at his funeral to reassure him.

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Sherlock's terrible at doing things the way other people do things, heh. Thank you for reading :)

[extraordinary.livejournal.com]

This was absolutely perfect!

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Aw thank you.

[cleflink.livejournal.com]

John's thoughts about funerals were sobering and sad but still somehow lovely. Sherlock is very lucky that John is as mad as he is; I doubt anyone else would be quite so taken with his shows of affection.

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Sherlock is indeed *very* lucky (although slimy boxes of chocolate are probably a sad part of my past as well, if I think about it). Thank you reading and commenting!

[mildred-bobbin.livejournal.com]

Lovely ending to a lovely story! and that sex scene, *fans self* very hot. Really liked the way they revisited all the memorable spots to have something to eat; John's idea of romantic. Really great, lovely funny, sexy, fluffy and romantic Johnlock, thank you again!!

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Yayayy! I'm so glad you liked it! I have zero experience writing fluff, and wasn't sure if I'd do justice to what you wanted. You have no idea how relieved I was when I saw your comments :)

Thanks for your lovely prompt and happy new year! :)

[mildred-bobbin.livejournal.com]

Happy new year to you too! It was just lovely, thanks again!

[mildred-bobbin.livejournal.com]

Oh and I really liked the way Sherlock read John's cues about Farrier and said the right thing to make him feel better, and the pen gift, when Sherlock meant so much by it but thought John still wasn't reciprocating was just perfect.

[innie_darling]

This was fantastic, particularly John's "appreciated arm" and this sobering bit: Seventy people. Seventy people who would have come together to remember whatever good he’d done in this life; John knew there’d been some. He’d been a good doctor, a good listener. To be remembered for that, and not for being the shaken man alone in his bedsit turning the barrel of the gun round and round, the clickclick of it the only sound in the room.

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Into every bit of fluff must come some angst, or I get the DTs. Thank you for reading and commenting :)

[tetsubinatu.livejournal.com]

I think I'm going to save this one. It's a gem!

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[shezan.livejournal.com]

This was truly, truly lovely, and again the writing is outstanding; clear and perceptive and detailed.

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much, I'm so glad you liked it :)

[cyanne]

This is just stunning. I'm amazed at how true to the characters this feels and so emotional, it's just lovely.

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Aw thank you very much, that's so kind of you to say :)

[lindentreeisle.livejournal.com]

This was beautifully written. My favorite combination of sweet and funny- kudos!

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[algoazul.livejournal.com]

Oh my, the slow romance - that first kiss!
...as if he’d been trying to find the right way to fit their lips together, as if the need to work it out had surprised him.

And the lovely peeks at Sherlock's character.
It wasn’t that Sherlock didn’t care. It was just that Sherlock wasn’t interested in personalising anything. Sherlock stuck everything important to everyone else in a giant box and opened it – or didn’t – as it suited him.

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it :)

[sra-danvers.livejournal.com]

Aw, that was lovely!

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[sunny-rainfall.livejournal.com]

sherlock=best bf ever

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Isn't he though? Charred roast pheasant mmm..

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

*grumbles* As a Sheffield Utd supporter, I take umbridge at your West Ham comments!!! *grin*

What a lovely ending - complete understanding (or near enough)!

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Ahaha I knew there'd be a football supporter somewhere who'd be indignant about it. I used WH for the stadium location more than anything. Next story Sheffield Utd goes through to the semis! Thanks for reading and commenting :)

[rifleman-s.livejournal.com]

*chortle* Hope that'll be a good omen!!!

(Actually the Upton Park stadium's great - I work for the Architects who designed & built the new stand and hotel!).

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

It looks very flash, from the pictures. I know next to nothing about football, but my SO who's mad for just sort of sniffed when I mentioned the Premier League and Sheffield Utd together so eh bugger the semis, Sheffield Utd win it! And in some magical twist of the rules, then go onto win the Champions League! Huzzah!

[quirkies.livejournal.com]

Absolutely lovely! I enjoyed every minute of this. :D

[rhuia.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much!