http://cinderbella333.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] cinderbella333.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] holmestice 2010-12-24 05:00 am (UTC)

You are brilliant. The first story was beautiful. It had such a poetic turn of phrase. It really caught their characterizations and then intensified them until it felt like the breathed in the same room with you. The interactions too. It's not all flowers and sunshine. It's darker than that and thus deeper. It's all about unspoken intention. Anyway. Brilliant.

And then the second piece! Hilarious. You go from this really deep, dark, serious piece and then you prove you can do light and funny just as well. Fantastic. I just adored them both.

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