I'm always interested in seeing John post-Reichenbach, and I especially like it when "ordinary" people turn out to have strengths that a Holmes might not have been expecting. Given John's trust issues, it's especially nice to see him being the recipient of help from Angelo, his fellow veteran, and the library staff. Thank you for all those aspects of the story, Author Anon.

I have debated with myself whether to remark on Kitty's false accusation of rape, but it troubled me greatly, since women are so often accused of lying about sexual assault. So I would like to ask you about it. Maybe there's another way to show Kitty's bad character causing damage to John?